Teacher Feedback on blog and pitch

Your pitch demonstrated a strong visual link between your video and your digipak and magazine ad - however your blog doesn't currently reflect this. You need to sketch out your ideas for both of the ancillary tasks - use photoshop or draw it out and then photograph it. It is essential that this is done.
Also you need to try and make contact with the artist. Write to them from their myspace page and take a screen grab of your attempt to contact them.
Your pitch was very convincing but it feels from your blog as if your ideas have got a little lost, there are some posts which are currently incomplete - this needs to be sorted out. Where are the storyboard images you have taken, if you have made an animatic you must upload it. Also you need to communicate the overall style you are trying to achieve - post more videos that influence you, both student and professional videos. Take a look at blog of the week for more inspiration on how to enhance your blog.
Great work so far, keep going.